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The Desert Blade (NSFW)

Post by Saber » October 31st, 2016, 11:12 pm

I've always meant to come up with a better title for this, but it's just sort of stuck now. =P

This is a story I started several months ago. I had a few chapters done, but I took a long break from it before coming back to it recently. It features one of my lovable and fluffy characters, Blade, in his time growing up in a desert city. (HAH, GET IT? THE DESERT BLADE? HAHAHA. >.>) Since Blade developed a love for other male dragons rather early on in his life, this story will feature mostly M/M content, except for a M/M/F threesome later on~

So, I'm going to do the same thing I did for my last story and post Dropbox links as well as a roughly-formatted version on here.

Link to Chapter One: Big City Thieves: https://www.dropbox.com/s/mu87d2z5x7tjt ... .docx?dl=0

Thanks for reading! I'd love some critique/feedback to help me improve. =3

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Re: The Desert Blade (NSFW)

Post by Herpyisback^^ » November 11th, 2016, 10:18 pm

Awsome until now :D, I really like the detailed Description of everything.
Have a good Day! ^^

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Post by Saber » November 12th, 2016, 7:43 pm

Herpyisback^^ wrote:Awsome until now :D, I really like the detailed Description of everything.
Thanks! I'm glad you're enjoying it. :D


Here is chapter two! This one has the lewd M/M stuff in it, and it continues right where we left off.

Dropbox: https://www.dropbox.com/s/n534g4h3n2mu7 ... .docx?dl=0

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Post by 64Dragonheart64 » November 12th, 2016, 9:55 pm

I'm speechless about all of the story. Beautiful from start to end. Hits the feels and i said "Poor boy!" like 3 times now.
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Post by Saber » November 14th, 2016, 1:12 am

64Dragonheart64 wrote:I'm speechless about all of the story. Beautiful from start to end. Hits the feels and i said "Poor boy!" like 3 times now.
Thanks! I'm glad you're enjoying it so far! :D
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Post by Saber » November 17th, 2016, 8:41 am

Here is the next chapter! More M/M sexy stuff again, with some intimate intercourse between two male dragon lovers~ =P

Dropbox: https://www.dropbox.com/s/vpnzijena81sh ... .docx?dl=0

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Post by 64Dragonheart64 » November 17th, 2016, 2:15 pm

Although i liked the previous one more than this one, this chapter doesn't lack quality, and you always seem to end them in nice cliffhangers. How many chapters do you have planned, by the way?
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Post by Saber » November 18th, 2016, 4:27 am

64Dragonheart64 wrote:Although i liked the previous one more than this one, this chapter doesn't lack quality, and you always seem to end them in nice cliffhangers. How many chapters do you have planned, by the way?
I like my cliffhangers~

And I have eight planned! Seven are already written, and I am working on the eighth now, so I should be done before too long. ^-^ If you're interested in reading ahead, I do have the other chapters posted on my Sofurry account: https://raevocrei.sofurry.com/
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Post by Saber » November 22nd, 2016, 8:13 am

Next chapter! Some plot stuff and story stuff and M/M sexy stuff. Thanks for reading!

Dropbox: https://www.dropbox.com/s/lpm2g0rfgpi0p ... .docx?dl=0


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Post by 64Dragonheart64 » November 22nd, 2016, 5:32 pm

I've found the ending hilarious. Superb as always.
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Post by Saber » November 25th, 2016, 5:39 am

64Dragonheart64 wrote:I've found the ending hilarious. Superb as always.
Thank you! ^-^

Here is the next chapter! And this one comes with a little change of pace: it's mostly focused on an M/M/F threesome, filled with plenty of sexy bits. x3 Enjoy~

Dropbox: https://www.dropbox.com/s/v0enzfw7rsmko ... .docx?dl=0


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Post by Aracth'nil » November 26th, 2016, 12:46 pm

Just started reading this and finished it up to here. Really good work! Waiting eagerly for the next chapter!
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