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Post by 64Dragonheart64 » February 6th, 2017, 3:22 am

Latest post of the previous page:

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64Dragonheart64 wrote:It wasn't until last night that i continued reading this from chapter 2, cause i had stopped there and i kept postponing it. At least it kept me from waiting through the suspense. Loving Ruari since the beginning. (Can you make a Ruari plushie and send it my way?)
If anyone gets a Ruari plushie, it's going to be me! x3 But I'd totally give them away if I could. XD

But I'm glad you're enjoying it!
Speaking of that, if you make a Blade plushie, send one my way as well please. Because there is nothing like plushie hoarding, right?
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Post by Aracth'nil » February 6th, 2017, 11:15 am

64Dragonheart64 wrote:
Saber wrote:
64Dragonheart64 wrote:It wasn't until last night that i continued reading this from chapter 2, cause i had stopped there and i kept postponing it. At least it kept me from waiting through the suspense. Loving Ruari since the beginning. (Can you make a Ruari plushie and send it my way?)
If anyone gets a Ruari plushie, it's going to be me! x3 But I'd totally give them away if I could. XD

But I'm glad you're enjoying it!
Speaking of that, if you make a Blade plushie, send one my way as well please. Because there is nothing like plushie hoarding, right?
Who doesn't love a plushie? A cute Ruari plushie would be so huggable.
People are like dragons. They can be dangerous, but they can be friendly. But whatever you are, take flight into the blue abyss of endless possibility!

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Post by 64Dragonheart64 » February 6th, 2017, 5:36 pm

It seems that you have a good excuse to get started in the plushie industry now.
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Post by Saber » February 10th, 2017, 11:22 pm

Maybe I'll have to start a Kickstarter! XD

But anywho, here's the next chapter!

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Post by Aracth'nil » February 11th, 2017, 12:29 pm

Dragon racism much. Anyway, nice chapter again - I really like how Keira is developing.
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Post by 64Dragonheart64 » February 11th, 2017, 1:27 pm

Good to see Keira her old attitude behind. I think i see a Keira-Ruari relationship here...
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Post by Saber » February 11th, 2017, 8:53 pm

Aracth'nil wrote:Dragon racism much. Anyway, nice chapter again - I really like how Keira is developing.
Yep, lots of deep hostility between the two races! Hopefully it doesn't become too much of an issue. =o
64Dragonheart64 wrote:Good to see Keira her old attitude behind. I think i see a Keira-Ruari relationship here...
It is good to see that she's moving on! Though, I dunno about a relationship between them. Ruari doesn't like her very much. =P
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Post by 64Dragonheart64 » February 12th, 2017, 3:50 am

Yeah, they don't like each other. Yet.
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Post by Saber » February 17th, 2017, 11:06 pm

Next chapter! =3

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Post by Saber » February 24th, 2017, 10:32 pm

Another short one!

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Post by 64Dragonheart64 » February 27th, 2017, 2:48 am

Love how the characters develop.
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Post by Aracth'nil » February 27th, 2017, 11:51 am

Nice chapter again. Just a question so I can gague how much writing that really is, how many pages is each chapter in Word andat what size and font? Cause it doesn't seem like much but it's probably massive from what I've tried to write.
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Post by Saber » February 27th, 2017, 1:44 pm

64Dragonheart64 wrote:Love how the characters develop.
Thanks! ^-^ Character development is probably my most favorite part of writing. =3
Aracth'nil wrote:Nice chapter again. Just a question so I can gague how much writing that really is, how many pages is each chapter in Word andat what size and font? Cause it doesn't seem like much but it's probably massive from what I've tried to write.
Thanks! I use Calibri size 11, but I also add an extra space after my paragraphs (so there is a whole line between my paragraphs) for formatting purposes. From what I've posted so far, there are 97 pages total and just a hair under 30,000 words total. So I guess my chapters average about 3,000 words each, which would be about 9ish pages each, but they do vary. ^-^
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