Herpy.nu will close down in January 2018 - will be replaced by something new and better.

Herpy has had a good 13 year run and will never be forgotten for those of us who experienced it. Sadly the site is today unappealing and is no longer fit for the audience of 2018, and years of smear campaigns have given us a reputation that has been hard to shake. We therefore made the choice to close the site and move on to a brighter future. While the forums will be archived as a memory of times of past greatness, new funds have been raised and new admins have been recruited to start working on a entire new community far away from Bad Dragon and any association with that company. The gallery will remain operational in the meantime. You can follow me on Twitter for further developments. We also have a Discord server which has become the heart of the community. If you wish to join it, send a PM to Valcyrie.

Herpy have always been my little lovechild since I joined over a decade ago. But he grew up, and as he has aged with dignity its time for his hatchling to take over. A fresh start for a new generation in a new era.

Kind regards,
Valcyrie

The last call [Short poem]

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Tsidia, the mind player
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The last call [Short poem]

Post by Tsidia, the mind player » September 16th, 2017, 10:16 pm

~Tsidia~
This is the last call
Stringmasters fall
Where the lies cross
And the truths unfold

If you are here
Silence my scream
Without you though
I am no more
"Break your chains and make your move, or you'll only see a dreamwavers wall"

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Re: The last call [Short poem]

Post by Tsidia, the mind player » September 16th, 2017, 10:17 pm

Feel free to express how much of pure_garbage/masterpiece it is and what improvements can be made. I'm open to all kinds of criticism as long as I can learn from it
"Break your chains and make your move, or you'll only see a dreamwavers wall"

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Re: The last call [Short poem]

Post by Mazrogal » September 19th, 2017, 3:24 pm

Well hmm have no critique to give other then it seems a bit short but then again you wrote in title it was short. Other then that i like the wording of it.
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