~Tsidia~
This is the last call
Stringmasters fall
Where the lies cross
And the truths unfold
If you are here
Silence my scream
Without you though
I am no more
Herpy.nu is now closed and archived - will be replaced by something new and better.
Herpy has had a good 13 year run and will never be forgotten for those of us who experienced it. Sadly the site is today unappealing and is no longer fit for the audience of 2018. The gallery will remain operational until further notice. You can follow me on Twitter for further developments. We also have a Discord server which has become the heart of the community. If you wish to join it, send me a PM over Twitter.
Kind regards,
Valcyrie
Herpy has had a good 13 year run and will never be forgotten for those of us who experienced it. Sadly the site is today unappealing and is no longer fit for the audience of 2018. The gallery will remain operational until further notice. You can follow me on Twitter for further developments. We also have a Discord server which has become the heart of the community. If you wish to join it, send me a PM over Twitter.
Kind regards,
Valcyrie
The last call [Short poem]
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Tsidia, the mind player
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The last call [Short poem]
"Break your chains and make your move, or you'll only see a dreamwavers wall"
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Tsidia, the mind player
- Posts: 25
- Joined: July 3rd, 2017, 10:38 am
- Gender: Female
- Age: 23
- Location: Layrian, in the land of Nuira
- I am a: Author
- Contact:
- Status: Offline
Re: The last call [Short poem]
Feel free to express how much of pure_garbage/masterpiece it is and what improvements can be made. I'm open to all kinds of criticism as long as I can learn from it
"Break your chains and make your move, or you'll only see a dreamwavers wall"
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Mazrogal
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Re: The last call [Short poem]
Well hmm have no critique to give other then it seems a bit short but then again you wrote in title it was short. Other then that i like the wording of it.
''Life is a struggle sometimes just push through and fight never give up''
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My steamprofile: http://steamcommunity.com/id/Mazrogal Feel free to send a friend request^^